Thursday, March 22, 2012

Andekha Tufaan



Namkeen paani kuch idhar bi hai baandh ki peeche tufaan ki tarha thapede marta hua. baad kabi yaha bi aati hai ehsaso ka dum ghoti hui.
aur beh jati hai imarate jo bani thi palko ki chaon mei, sapno ki narm ithose.
ye paani samundar ki tarha vishal na sahi .
kabi chkh kar dekho. ye kam kadwa bi nahi.
baad ke bad sanate ki goonj khokhla ek aks chod jati hai, sab kuch cheen kar...
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11 comments:

  1. Sonam ChawlaMarch 22, 2012 at 1:45 AM

    Touched.... :)gud rather deep effort

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  2. ani_asetMarch 22, 2012 at 2:20 AM

    wow loved it :) why have you stopped tweeting?

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  3. Avantika KaushikMarch 22, 2012 at 2:28 AM

    Thanks Sonam :)

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  4. Avantika KaushikMarch 22, 2012 at 2:37 AM

    @ani I dont get time these days.. and out of touch for once, it is out life forever :>

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  5. Avantika KaushikMarch 22, 2012 at 2:38 AM

    @ani And I am glad u liked it.. thanks!

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  6. ani_asetMarch 22, 2012 at 3:43 AM

    arey nooo start start..we mis syou there :D

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  7. ani_asetMarch 22, 2012 at 3:44 AM

    please remove word verification and rather moderate comments :(

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  8. Krishnan SMarch 22, 2012 at 5:24 AM

    Nice one
    I liked it..... :) gud goin

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  9. Avantika KaushikMarch 22, 2012 at 9:28 AM

    @ani hehe..i know i shud hv removed it long back. just did that. @krishnan thanks :))

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  10. Ritesh AgarwalApril 2, 2012 at 1:51 AM

    Nice thoughts :)

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  11. ani_asetMay 12, 2012 at 9:32 PM

    when back tweeting?

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