Tuesday, June 28, 2011

Monsoon Again




When hard luck n a fat chance build your way...
When it is like standing on a crater crust,
Which can spue fire any day,
You can predict
You can not commit
Better get carried to a destination
where it takes you today

A desperate urge to fly
A relentless heart to get high
Once it wanted a calm stay among shy leaves
Like waves of a restless sea,
My heart rattles and rambles this dusk.

The day I left your shadow.
I knew there would be no sunlight for me.
There is layer of dark clouds in the sky.
And the monsoon is back calling again at me
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10 comments:

  1. Krishnan SJune 28, 2011 at 5:09 AM

    Superb.........

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  2. RachitJune 28, 2011 at 9:13 AM

    and this time it will rain heavily. 'coz I'm all alone crying for you :(

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  3. Avantika KaushikJune 28, 2011 at 9:24 AM

    Thanks a lot Rachit........

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  4. Avantika KaushikJune 28, 2011 at 9:25 AM

    thanks krishnan

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  5. wanderingsoulJuly 1, 2011 at 12:39 AM

    Very evocative as always dear ... :)may u rejoice in the spirit of the monsoons!

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  6. Avantika KaushikJuly 1, 2011 at 1:10 AM

    thanks wandering soul..

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  7. UnknownJuly 6, 2011 at 5:27 AM

    captures the restless soul of monsoon perfectly. great post!

    keep writing,
    mohit

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  8. Avantika KaushikJuly 7, 2011 at 3:41 AM

    Thanks MITOSTARGAZER :) keep visiting!

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  9. PriyankaJuly 17, 2011 at 11:41 PM

    hey

    wen will u write sumthing new? its been ages... these are so refreshing, keep updating dear!


    Best wishes,
    Priyanka

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  10. Avantika KaushikJuly 20, 2011 at 10:05 PM

    priyanka! u still following my blog?? m so glad.. :)) atleast let me have ur e-mail id plz!

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